19-05-2026, 10:37 AM
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1) Right 'Tibia' - correct medical name for that organ. Three days observation for infection & six weeks bed rest - perfect medical treatment. I am surprised for your informative writing. You also explained well about marketing strategies and open relationship side affects in the previous chapters. Great jack of all!
2) Gowtham woke up up at 6.30 am IST next day morning after the candle light fucking. He got ready in two hours and came for breakfast to Sneha's house. He doesn't have a maid also and he wouldn't have been able to clean all the rose petals in his house properly in that two hours span. Went to office straight from Sneha's house and met with accident in that evening. It would be natural to show the uncleaned house to Suresh/Sneha when they bring him back or open his house to get his clothes & dental kit to hospital. Just a thought for the sake of good continuity
3) Initially I didn't like the cinematic turn of his accident, but later realising that it would help in multiple ways to progress the story
a) The couple may get a clue about kidnap while adjusting things in his house
b) Gowtham repents the way the couple treat him as a family member
c) Alternatively - the peaks of sadism can also be shown when he tries to pull Sneha more towards him in the sympathy angle
Yes, I saw you were mentioning great about Mirna charecter in your comments under that story. I read the synopsis. Yet to read it
Good luck for the remaining chapters of this Part-1 ahead!
2) Gowtham woke up up at 6.30 am IST next day morning after the candle light fucking. He got ready in two hours and came for breakfast to Sneha's house. He doesn't have a maid also and he wouldn't have been able to clean all the rose petals in his house properly in that two hours span. Went to office straight from Sneha's house and met with accident in that evening. It would be natural to show the uncleaned house to Suresh/Sneha when they bring him back or open his house to get his clothes & dental kit to hospital. Just a thought for the sake of good continuity
3) Initially I didn't like the cinematic turn of his accident, but later realising that it would help in multiple ways to progress the story
a) The couple may get a clue about kidnap while adjusting things in his house
b) Gowtham repents the way the couple treat him as a family member
c) Alternatively - the peaks of sadism can also be shown when he tries to pull Sneha more towards him in the sympathy angle
Yes, I saw you were mentioning great about Mirna charecter in your comments under that story. I read the synopsis. Yet to read it
Good luck for the remaining chapters of this Part-1 ahead!
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