17-05-2026, 07:58 AM
(06-09-2025, 02:06 PM)opendoor Wrote: bro, nice start.. dont worry about readers response which in general is luke warm..
try to put some related pics... many dont have patience to read the text (fast paced world) , if you have pics, it will attract their attention, if they like what they see then they might start reading
also give more personal details about the main characters like their appearance, height, stats etc
Example : the father in law may look like this
Itna bhi Bura n dikhye.... chehara to maast hona chahiye ki..., aaaur iska kadak....mota lund uske dhoti Se hi dikhta ... To bahu bhi use dekh kar khush ho ki kaash ye Mera hubby hota to jam kar Mai apni chut chuda Kar maje leti..... aaaur ghar me din raat nangi.... Bina chadhdhi ganji ke rahti....


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