Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[heygiwriter]

Critics will always find something to criticize, no matter what you write. Readers, too, will offer their opinions—often asking you to reshape the story to fit their own expectations. But the truth is, people’s desires are endless; no piece of writing can satisfy everyone. 

As a reader of your story, i hereby request you not to please every voice, but to stay true to your own vision and tell the story as you believe it should be told.

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