Adultery The Strict wife Swati's humiliation and Submission.

[Suresh@123]

Wow!! What an amazing amazing story you have started Suresh!
The concept of the story is really ground breaking and very unique, and the way you have written, the story progressed so far is very erotic!

Funny thing I must tell you, "I started fantasizing about a story concept on, how an ugly old fart would try to seduce very beautiful married woman. Since he's ugly fat and bald, he has no charms in physical features, and hence must use mind tricks to seduce her. But the twist is she's aware of his plans and pretends to play along to see how far the dirty old man goes!"

This was only a thought in my mind but it turns out the universe pointed me to this story where it was already happening!... in a much more elaborated way!! So thank you for writing this story.

The way you had described the strong character nature of the protagonist woman and also the beauty she endows is exactly the way I had imagined in my mind! The start is already great, and especially I must point out this particular update of the story:


For me this is The Most Erotic Update Ever!! This sets the stage for how the story will progress forward and the thoughts of each player. I like how powerful, yet vulnerable Swati's looks. The way she plays along, the subtlelities of her heavy breaths and the words chosen... Suresh you nailed this update, it is extremely erotic to read and re-read. And the way you have explained the biology of the events happening within Swati is damn too erotic to read! It felt like I am reading another YLTS written novel. Amazing Job Suresh!!

The updates following this masterpiece is also very very erotic, but have some suggestions for the two recent update below. Hope you don't mind! and they are nothing major! I'd like to point out two of those here -


This update, although setting stage for the next (inevitable) event. It felt like a tiny bit rushed... only very tiny bit nothing to worry much. So, I had hoped there would be, a bit more (erotic) dialogue exchange, back and forth between the players, before she finally agrees (surrenders) for "the massage." ;) ...

I understand, it would be a bit repetitive but it would've also been erotic stage setting. And also I had hoped Swati would agree to the massage in the evening after finishing her shift. So that there would've been a lot more content in the update.

But you can ignore my suggests for above update as I know I am nitpicking a bit too much here lol. My apologies!

But I have to draw your attention specifically to your recent most update :


Very very erotic update Suresh!! And this particular update, I just love how her conflicting thoughts continue to dominate her and how this "fierce tigress" is feeling shy, yet her body is giving away to the temptations bit by bit! I like how well you have written the duality of her mind. Nicely done!

And also, on the contrary I think there have been a very minor inaccuracy in terms of the sequence of events that is unfolding here...

- It is unclear as to what was Swati wearing underneath her short nightie? Was she wearing any undergarments or was she stark naked underneath?
I did read that you had mentioned that she was wearing only her nightie but explicit description like "she's not wearing any bra or panty underneath her flimsy nightie" would've added a bit more eroticism.

- The massage sequence started from her neck, then shoulders, then further her upper back and proceding to her lower back, all the while applying oil. The mistake which I felt here is, when he's applying oil on her neck and shoulders (and even upper back) I can understand the nightie, to the large extent won't be a hindrance while applying, assuming the nightie is tied lower at the back and has large exposed upper back. But when he proceeds to apply oil massaging from upper back to lower back, I felt the nightie here will definitely be a hindrance!
So my question is, in this event, did the masseur skillfully remove some part of nightie? leading unto exposed open back, down til her lower back or did he remove the straps of her nightie (skillfully) while massaging her shoulders without her being aware and then later on slid it down in the pretext of massage! (even then, I still feel since she's lying down with her front facing on the bed, it is still hard to pull the nightie down unless she cooperated?) Anyway I feel there's something missing for the flow here, - "how was he able to access her bare lower back?"

Apologies if I wrote too much, I didn't mean to overwhelm you and all of the above are probably very superficially minor.
I am just a big fan of this story and I have great hopes for this story!
Please do continue, can't wait to read the next and many many more spicy updates!

Good luck!

Thank you for your valuable feed back bro.. Sure I will noticed and will correct