16-05-2026, 02:01 AM
So humans make mistakes hence all of a sudden couple make mistakes again after suffering for a while? Sneha I can understand but Suresh , that's insanity.
Just to continue story, there are loopholes created here and there and Author asks us to adjust, they are humans but something like this is too silly, just before this night they have talked about their plan to extract truth, how come they will forget it. Though rest of the story and conversations are top notch, the subtle plot holes like these will bring the story down. Why would Suresh relax and let his plan know for Gautham after keeping his mouth shut with out letting Gautham know for months. Even if he thinks he did claim his wife back, both know they had to continue to play the game of sex and get the truth from Gautham....Author mentioned couple knows that Gautham might have heard their talk, then why would Sneha and Suresh not know or at least not discuss that their game is out in the open now?
I think the story began as probably a 50 or 75 chapter one but now Author is hell bent on making this a saga and to extend it he is going on a loop. Once Sneha fell for Gautham after she came back to her husband, now if she falls for sex again, then this becomes not only monotonous but Sneha loses credibility big time.
Some predictions:
Aditya will be obviously be smitten by Sneha, its inevitable...so Aditya and Suresh are going to go loggerheads...Gautham wants money so he is probably the new talent that Aditya wants Suresh to bring to his R&D. Or majorly 3 men will circle around Sneha now
Aditya - Wants to sleep with her at any cost
Gautham - Will want to make her a slut or revenge so he probably will make a deal with Aditya to give him Sneha if they ever meet.
Suresh - Once again husband who is at the brink of losing her, or yet another marathon of sex he needs to see Sneha and her pursuers.
Varsha - Yet to be decided if she is going to help or break Gautham but my guess she will love him eventually but Gautham is a crook he doesn't deserve her.
~RCF
Just to continue story, there are loopholes created here and there and Author asks us to adjust, they are humans but something like this is too silly, just before this night they have talked about their plan to extract truth, how come they will forget it. Though rest of the story and conversations are top notch, the subtle plot holes like these will bring the story down. Why would Suresh relax and let his plan know for Gautham after keeping his mouth shut with out letting Gautham know for months. Even if he thinks he did claim his wife back, both know they had to continue to play the game of sex and get the truth from Gautham....Author mentioned couple knows that Gautham might have heard their talk, then why would Sneha and Suresh not know or at least not discuss that their game is out in the open now?
I think the story began as probably a 50 or 75 chapter one but now Author is hell bent on making this a saga and to extend it he is going on a loop. Once Sneha fell for Gautham after she came back to her husband, now if she falls for sex again, then this becomes not only monotonous but Sneha loses credibility big time.
Some predictions:
Aditya will be obviously be smitten by Sneha, its inevitable...so Aditya and Suresh are going to go loggerheads...Gautham wants money so he is probably the new talent that Aditya wants Suresh to bring to his R&D. Or majorly 3 men will circle around Sneha now
Aditya - Wants to sleep with her at any cost
Gautham - Will want to make her a slut or revenge so he probably will make a deal with Aditya to give him Sneha if they ever meet.
Suresh - Once again husband who is at the brink of losing her, or yet another marathon of sex he needs to see Sneha and her pursuers.
Varsha - Yet to be decided if she is going to help or break Gautham but my guess she will love him eventually but Gautham is a crook he doesn't deserve her.
~RCF
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