[creamydelight]

People wanting to "help" the writer are kindly requested to create their own threads with their own original ideas and not spoil this. I have read parts of the other Anita Singh thread that's going on, and it has made an absolute helpless damsel out of this original character of Anita. The guy is predatory, the Anita is a helpless mess. It is a completely different genre of erotica, sure some people would like it as this is subjective,, but has none of the high this style of writing and characterization creates.

While I also liked the original version when it was written, it makes absolutely no sense to add that as a flashback in this version, there is just no consistency with her character. Even in the older version I did have this thought.. at home she was one woman and in the market she was another.

There are parallel stories. This is already a flashback that Anita is having while lying on the bed in the village.

Even if it is the writer's passion, it need not be his priority. There is real life. Comparing the "time taken" writing a comment/reply with the effort required to generate original content is ludicrous.

Even I'm frustrated sometimes by the time between updates, but even if some updates come after months, there are always banger mega updates like 113-115 that more than make up for it.