15-05-2026, 10:32 AM
(15-05-2026, 10:09 AM)VinodV Wrote: Good updates! Thanks for the bunch.
Chapter 114 -
1) Sneha still not believing that Gowtham is the reason for kidnap looks very realistic. Good!
2) Sneha's reaction when she got to know that Suresh was tricked to become an unwilling cuckold...waw not adequate & satisfying! The naration should have been more powerful expressing her shocking feelings so that it would have added more weight to her dialogue of "... I will teach him a lesson" - because she warned Gowtham many times earlier about calling Suresh as cuckold!!!
i agree. an entire paragraph went missing. Couldnt see in my version too.
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