Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[Hellybelly]

After a long time I would like to say something..,

I am reading this story since 2017, when it was first started not sure if it was (2017-18-19)
2026 mid is running
Almost a decade has passed if I am right.
Story has not passed it's first fucking(newer version)
Erotica or any long novel need to have tight plot, story lacks it, writer must understand that you are not writing a periodical which will last for decades. You are writing an erotica which will last for maximum 500 updates and almost 3000 pages. Where you will slowly develop a charecter and a plot which will eventually end when the character which once started as closed sanskari female would now has reached the upper limits of sex.
Now the reality is, the first extremely erotic version has completely been vanished and new version which is unnecessarily streched is here.
How can readers engage it for another decade?

Have sean ever thought that how great writer he is?, if he has the ability and we do believe that he has, he will create many other anitas in other stories with other name..

He must understand that he is the greatest writer and master of erotica which this anonymous site of stories will ever be able to produce? I'm not flattering I'm saying the truth......but .....but......but
He must also understand that his abilities does not end with one story only ...there are many plots which he can create in friction of seconds...

Now

What he can do


Mix the both plots,....like you can create some parallel event which would create newer events and almost all readers has read the both stories......by. Doing that you'll have a maximised streched story without any new updates. In one update you can mix both.

And


You'll be much more relieved as you will have few new characters as well

Even in its minute to minute details this story has always lacked the essential dick rising details of an erotica
(Lund is 8 inches long...readers don't know if that's circumcised or not) Can a female handle a massive 8 inch inside her anus or not, absolutely no realism... (We can acknowledge the way he stretched the dream sequence is fucking questionable) It was as long as some stories are there in forum

Add details which are humane and realistic, and you can do it.....older character of jeetu was way more erotic as hi actions were more frequent ad humane. Kindly consider my request and add older story in this as a flashback and then continue it without streching it long you must understand the Time .....it's been a decade and you'll never be able to complete it as you don't have time, by adding both you'll be able to create a 300 updates story withing 200 updates....we all are aware of both so we will relate....

Only one story will not decide you as writer but one 1decadelongfailedstory will decide if you are a good writer or good for nothing.

Even novels are not this much confused in plot and actions


I'm telling you because I read it for so long and I keep a very deeper understanding of fiction than 90% of your readers...
I


Even after this much involvement you're not able to do it


Then I'm asking all the readers and with humbleness to you

That I can take this story forward and I will create an erotica this world of readwrs will remember

If you agree with me then do it as I suggested you(you'll thank me) and I'd be happy to suggest you wit9any demands,(just drop a text in DM)

If you don't want to do it then it's okay...

I'm suggesting all readers to find another way ...don't force, ask or demand, a writer's nonchalant attitude is okay but a nonchalant reader is death of writer...


Thank you