Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[RCF]

Firstly we need to respect author for his creativity and dedication to towards postings so that we are entertained

We, sometimes emotionally indulge in the story, forget it is unrealistic, carried away with plot and takes side on one characters...

Isn't to much to ask the writer. Let's be patient on narrative he is trying to build thru plot.

Who lost respect for Author? Do not be too sensitive on posting what you think about the plot, it is for healthy discussion. Negative or positive should both be encouraged. Just because I mentioned one episode could be better doesn't mean I disrespect Author or disregarding his hard work. We are discussing only plot points and nothing personal. It will only help writer to come up with best outcomes. 

Story with out discussion will lose interest over time for Author. 

~RCF