[slammaster]

I am dissatisfied with the update.. May be i had huge expectation i guess..
Could have been little more big..
Also couldnt find devolopment in story, mainly shipda part... This is my personal opinion...

It was a master class of an update nothing Is Random everything is connected everything has meaning he's World building and doing a great job showing that he has some more tricks up his sleeves and a lot of different plans it's not one-dimensional it's multi-layered with different tones and different Paces for each scenario and character I say more of this he's truly talented and for an update coming back from an injury he has not missed a step I think it's only going to get a lot better i understand where you're coming from from the long wait but this update is pure gold it's as if he has not left he's not just running into blunt sex he's making it climatic worth it a lot of foreplay a lot of building that only makes the thrill and the reward more rewarding just sit back and relax he has not abandoned anything the threat is more alive than ever very hopeful for a bright future we have nothing to worry about we're in good hands expect the next couple of dates to be mind blowing