Adultery இனிமையான வாழ்வு

[venkygeethu]

Excellent story.. However, as the hero of the story, Arun's body structure should have been like Senthil's and the way he had sex. He should have been put above everyone else. Since Geeta and Arun are the heroes and heroines, more focus should have been given to them. It seems inconsistent that other boys can have sex for a longer time than the hero. His character as the hero is not matching with the others. The story was tense and tense at the beginning, but it is slowly decreasing. However, your writing skills are very good. At first, the aspects seem good.

First of all you should know the age that Arun mentioned at the beginning when he met Geetha at first at Mysore and other thing I mentioned you that Senthil was unmarried bachelor who was young and energetic and as mentioned Arun and Geetha are the main hero and heroine the story gradually moves around their family and there should be scope given for the others too   moreover if you keenly notify the happenings in all sequences Arun will be present in all situations and as I told life is not only sex but it has feelings and emotions that can be retained only by Arun and his Mother in law  if hero is not matching with others then he is the true hero and you told about inconsistent  that too means  only having sex with the same pair and continuing in a monotonous way and my friend if you feel the tense and interest decreasing then you can readily stop reading this story and find the one that suits you.