Adultery இனிமையான வாழ்வு

[Green6520]

Excellent story.. However, as the hero of the story, Arun's body structure should have been like Senthil's and the way he had sex. He should have been put above everyone else. Since Geeta and Arun are the heroes and heroines, more focus should have been given to them. It seems inconsistent that other boys can have sex for a longer time than the hero. His character as the hero is not matching with the others. The story was tense and tense at the beginning, but it is slowly decreasing. However, your writing skills are very good. At first, the aspects seem good.