Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[prshma]

The storytelling quality of this writer is exceptionally good. Every part of the story ends at a place where he keeps the readers guessing and speculating about what's going to happen next. The language is also very free flowing. All in all a great achievement.

Now coming to the story I think now the story has involved a character too many. I assume that the writer didn't have the intention of involving the later added on characters like Aditya in this story from the very beginning of this story. Now the story is poised in such a situation where Sneha, according to me, has become the root cause of all of the pain Suresh is experiencing. Being a wife just cosying upto him is not enough if you can sense that your husband is staying far off. She is so engrossed in getting physical pleasure that she is totally disregarding the fact that majority of men when hurt deeply by the person they love don't cause a scene but just walk away. 

I think it's time Sneha clears her dilemma and understands her husband's mental condition more clearly and make use of whatever little bit of brain she has (she may have big boobs, a big ass but she definitely has a microscopic brain) by shutting out Gowtham fully from coming anywhere near her by even banning his entry from their house and threatening Gowtham with ra.pe and molestation charges if he tries to disturb her family ever again.