30-04-2026, 06:46 PM
This is what happens when readers gave suggestions and the author took it in... He started it a short story but in sake of reader's suggestion he is trying elobrate and the frequent update is missing... Readers should comment on characters and any flow in the story.. And suggesting idea would make the story lag...


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