26-04-2026, 05:10 AM
Hello Venku, you write a banger. It is all the aspects of a great, slow-burning story. You build up the tempo, and when it is at its peak, you deliver the right amount of throttle. As a reader, I just want to add one more thing, some of the parts seem to be repeating. Next time, if you write a story again, and if you can address that issue, definitely you can make a better one than this one.



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