24-04-2026, 01:25 PM
Auther Note:- If you haven't read this story by DanielQSteele1, read it now. It won't make any sense if you don't. This story is my Moby Dick, the one I've fixated on since I read it the first time. DQS1 is a very talented writer, but he has a habit of making his male protagonists a little too noble, putting up with extraordinarily hurtful things from the women they love. This version, while it doesn't exactly go to the dark side, knocks at the door. I want to thank DQS for his graciousness in letting me use his characters, and Bebop 3 and the rest of my friends for their input.
There are a few characters from his other stories in this version. Bill Maitland from When We Were Married, as well as Lew and Mona Walters from The last Goodbye. And I probably got the timelines wrong but I tried to be as close as possible.
One more thing. This was the catalyst for my August event, Welcome To The New World. I thought of it and Bebob 3 took the idea and ran with it. It's probably more his project than mine, and I thank him.
There are a few characters from his other stories in this version. Bill Maitland from When We Were Married, as well as Lew and Mona Walters from The last Goodbye. And I probably got the timelines wrong but I tried to be as close as possible.
One more thing. This was the catalyst for my August event, Welcome To The New World. I thought of it and Bebob 3 took the idea and ran with it. It's probably more his project than mine, and I thank him.
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