20-04-2026, 02:36 AM
Both Versions were Posted. Please rate, comment, and leave feedback on how you are liking the story so far. I know this story is going to be different from the original one, and some readers got disappointed.
But trust me, I can not be the same author, I can not look into his mind and develop a story the way he wants or wanted . I can only be inspired by his work. Motive of these last few episode was to develop Ammi Character, she is pure in heart as well beautiful. She desire freedom.
Your Feedback gives idea author were he is going wrong and sometime inspire to idea how he can improve more . Feedback Loop is Must .
But trust me, I can not be the same author, I can not look into his mind and develop a story the way he wants or wanted . I can only be inspired by his work. Motive of these last few episode was to develop Ammi Character, she is pure in heart as well beautiful. She desire freedom.
Your Feedback gives idea author were he is going wrong and sometime inspire to idea how he can improve more . Feedback Loop is Must .
Deepak Kapoor
Author on amazon
https://xossipy.com/thread-71793.html -- अनीता सिंह-
https://xossipy.com/thread-73166.html - अम्मी और अंकल
Author on amazon
- An Innocent Beauty Series ( 5 Books )
https://xossipy.com/thread-71793.html -- अनीता सिंह-
https://xossipy.com/thread-73166.html - अम्मी और अंकल


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