Adultery Testing Her Limits : Web of Lust and Revenge

[Aavesh9]

You're doing an excellent job so far, Sir!


What truly sets a great writer apart is not just talent, but the confidence to trust their own vision. So please - continue at the pace you've set, and stay true to the model you feel is 'apt' for the characters and story you've conceived.

Yes, you should absolutely read the comments and feedback from your readers,  that's part of growing as a writer. But altering your story to fit someone else's fantasies or wishes? I believe that would strip away the very originality you, as a writer, are striving to bring into your work.

Here's the motivational truth: Every great story ever told was first doubted by someone. The magic lies in holding your course while keeping your heart open.

Again, I'm not saying you should ignore feedback. Far from it - I clearly support the viewpoints your fan-base shares here. Some of their ideas genuinely interest me too, and they make me think, 'What if...?' or 'Wouldn't it be better than...?'

But at the end of the day, I stand by my opinion: Write at your pace. Write what you have in mind. Be open to suggestions, criticism, and appraisals - but never let them rewrite your soul.

My critical viewpoint/comment: You'd want to read once or twice before posting each part, because through my eyes, there might be some 'diction' that you may need to correct to make this a wonderful read. In addition, once you post it, see if the post is actually clean like how you want to see it yourself (because, I am posting YLTS chapters on "A Banana Muffin Saga", and each time I click 'post' then  what I find is lots of gaps between the sentences, paragraphs, font irregularity and it's a mess for me to give another look at my own post - so, I go back, click 'edit-post' and make all the 'cosmetic' corrections and post once again - this is only to give the readers a clear post that they can enjoy while reading. You may need to look at it in this way once to check what I said make sense.


You're on the right path. Keep going, Sir. Your best story is still ahead of you."