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[Rishabh1]

Enduko unnecessary ga poetic ga undi anipistundi, language ni inkoncham vaaduka bhasha la streamline chesi
akkadakkada bootulu koncham vaadi (deliberate ga vaadakapovatam koncham speed breaker la undi), otherwise it feels like bunch of good people fucking for no reason! more importantly
story ekkuva valli and ranga rao characters tho cheppiste baguntundi anipistundi rather than third person. Prasad tho valli
valla sessions grunichi mellaga open ga cheppatam start cheste it will be more erotic. Sorry bro I didnt read the story
end-to-end, just bits and pieces because it felt too poetic for my liking. nenu cheppedi ela ante, Edigina koduku tho talli
jeevitam, amma mogudu ee stories la pace natural ga flow aithe inka baguntundi ani, lakshmi, aamani gari narration
choodandi oka sari valla room lo manam nunchoni choostunnattu untundi chadivinattu kakunda. I hope you understand
what I'm trying to get at. Things I liked, kastapadi valli character and story base ni build chesaru well done. I must tell
you, recent times lo this is one of very good stories and has all the potential to become one of the best. Thanks for all
your efforts. Keep up the good work and apologies for any feedback you didnt like.