11-04-2026, 07:01 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-04-2026, 07:28 AM by Fing fing. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Story is good, but I would suggest you to write different from incest or mom/son story. Go for unique story line with tragedy with cuckson and cuckold theme. Son will have master plan but some tragedy happen and lose his mom to strong bull...
Sometime losing makes storyline more stronger
Make it unique buddy, stand out from rest
Sometime losing makes storyline more stronger
Make it unique buddy, stand out from rest
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