11-04-2026, 12:47 PM
Hello Heyij,
Man, what a ride it is… I know you take your time to set the plot, and immediate sex doesn’t happen in your stories. But once i get into the plot, there’s no turning back, your story just drags me inside.
Your stories are more than just sex; they always have a strong hook and a solid plotline that I get invested in. I have no words to praise you. I don’t know how you choose the right words to describe the visuals and the happenings between the couple, I felt like I was watching Suriya and Anandhi up close in the resort.
Firstly, this story had such a long journey, misunderstood husband Rahul, the age/time machine, his new look as Jeeva, thrashing the offenders, then the complications in the experiment, initial misunderstanding between him and Suriya, Rahul planting proofs and disappearing… then him orchestrating everything along with Suriya to make his wife marry Suriya for a new life.
Then Suriya taking his own route to seduce her, Suriya and Anandhi getting into the affair, the truth about Jeeva being Rahul, then Suriya and Anandhi starting a new life… and now Rahul coming back again, complicating things further, along with this latest pregnancy. Uffff… what a drive, man.
The affair between Suriya and Anandhi is very, very sensual. It may sound morally wrong, but I’m rooting for Suriya and Anandhi to end up together. In your previous story, Bharath and Mirna had the same intensity of affair, but at least Bharath was clearly a wrong person, he had no morality and just used Mirna for sex at a point.
Here, Suriya is a gentleman. He waited for her, approached her only after he believed Rahul had left her, and planned things patiently. And one thing I don’t get, what exactly did Rahul do that makes Anandhi still hang on to him so much?
Suriya has actually been wronged here. First Rahul pulled him in to take Anandhi away for her better future. He made sure they got into a proper affair, like a point of no return. He gave them time. By the time Anandhi changed her mind and chose Suriya for marriage, Rahul came back trying to claim her again.
Just because he sacrificed doesn’t mean he’s pure. His actions feel selfish—whether pushing her away or trying to take her back, it’s all for his own needs. Suriya, on the other hand, found hope in Anandhi, even for a new dream and marriage.
I know you’ll have a better understanding of the story, and you’ve probably already planned a solid ending for each character. I can feel the story is in its final stages. Just wanted to register my thoughts.
Suriya needs a better ending. He was actually selfless, he gave her ample time to recover after Rahul (as Jeeva) disappeared, he never pressured her to marry him, and he waited until Anandhi herself said, “let’s get married.” That level of patience and respect deserves to be honored.
Man, what a ride it is… I know you take your time to set the plot, and immediate sex doesn’t happen in your stories. But once i get into the plot, there’s no turning back, your story just drags me inside.
Your stories are more than just sex; they always have a strong hook and a solid plotline that I get invested in. I have no words to praise you. I don’t know how you choose the right words to describe the visuals and the happenings between the couple, I felt like I was watching Suriya and Anandhi up close in the resort.
Firstly, this story had such a long journey, misunderstood husband Rahul, the age/time machine, his new look as Jeeva, thrashing the offenders, then the complications in the experiment, initial misunderstanding between him and Suriya, Rahul planting proofs and disappearing… then him orchestrating everything along with Suriya to make his wife marry Suriya for a new life.
Then Suriya taking his own route to seduce her, Suriya and Anandhi getting into the affair, the truth about Jeeva being Rahul, then Suriya and Anandhi starting a new life… and now Rahul coming back again, complicating things further, along with this latest pregnancy. Uffff… what a drive, man.
The affair between Suriya and Anandhi is very, very sensual. It may sound morally wrong, but I’m rooting for Suriya and Anandhi to end up together. In your previous story, Bharath and Mirna had the same intensity of affair, but at least Bharath was clearly a wrong person, he had no morality and just used Mirna for sex at a point.
Here, Suriya is a gentleman. He waited for her, approached her only after he believed Rahul had left her, and planned things patiently. And one thing I don’t get, what exactly did Rahul do that makes Anandhi still hang on to him so much?
Suriya has actually been wronged here. First Rahul pulled him in to take Anandhi away for her better future. He made sure they got into a proper affair, like a point of no return. He gave them time. By the time Anandhi changed her mind and chose Suriya for marriage, Rahul came back trying to claim her again.
Just because he sacrificed doesn’t mean he’s pure. His actions feel selfish—whether pushing her away or trying to take her back, it’s all for his own needs. Suriya, on the other hand, found hope in Anandhi, even for a new dream and marriage.
I know you’ll have a better understanding of the story, and you’ve probably already planned a solid ending for each character. I can feel the story is in its final stages. Just wanted to register my thoughts.
Suriya needs a better ending. He was actually selfless, he gave her ample time to recover after Rahul (as Jeeva) disappeared, he never pressured her to marry him, and he waited until Anandhi herself said, “let’s get married.” That level of patience and respect deserves to be honored.
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