06-04-2026, 01:38 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-04-2026, 01:52 AM by DeanWinchester00007. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Well , Yeah Completely Agree . SOLID UPDATE ! 
I love the way you sequence the events , So Sona knew half of the truth during the post concert Conversation .
and as For Sona ,
I was this close 
to closing the tab , What a save 
or else . They are the same Both VIKRAM , He just just going to bang her and she was letting him . No hesitation no nothing . That baby talk was so trash 
, and If that excites her then it clearly shows where her heart is . I dont why she is doing all the drama , If she dont feel the ick around VIKRAM and still cares for him , and still see him as victim of hers and all the yuck breaking her heart talk , She should stick with him . The Chapter 25 goes directly into the trash . All her progress was just farce and nothing more .
She cannot put the two men as equal in her life . If she consider VIKRAM as important as HEMANT , If He makes her think about having a future together then She should stick with VIKRAM , why the shallow hope and fake love for HEMANT , to whom she wants convince ? The way she feels about him , Even in future Hypothetically Whoever she marry or live with She will miss him . There is no scenario where VIKRAM will be just memory for her . Either accept VIKRAM or Sacrifice him both clearly shows She loves him and This is not fair to HEMANT. Either she totally loves Hemant or not . I dont know what happens in upcoming update , But One thing There is going to such a challenge . I wanna see How you gonna do it , If Sona really loves Hemant or not ? Love for Hemant and indifference towards VIKRAM but again what ever you do , I just hope you dont choose that bollywood troupe of that Oh I like them both , But I love him more etc etc .
She is just so Stupid . Anjana said so many things , She was nodding her head like kid . I am afraid tomorrow If DARAKSH approached her , she would believe him too (She is so stupid , Every one is playing her . At this point I dont know If you are rage baiting or not . The frustration i felt reading that part , clearly the story is working hahaha . That deserves appreciation )
That BITCH MEGHNA , She will neve change , which is good . After all things Hemant did , She is still the same but Good Good . I hope She is not out of Hemant's RADAR .
This VIKRAM character is so irritating and No wonder ARIJIT SINGH is RETIRED probably that was his last concert . I hope DARAKSH just bash his fucking skull . I just hope for once HEMANT just beat the shit out of him .
Leave it .
So New Character , Katherine , Is she relevant to the story ?
NOW , MY FAVORITE PART :- HEMANT's Back Story .
First of all again , I love the way sequence the Flashback with ongoing story . So Sona knows about Hemant while He was doing his mission .
Dan , was in wheelchair , I am curious to know what happened ?
Hemant's Entry and THE FORMATION OF GARUDA was the best part of the story. I felt so excited while reading it .
Why Dan is telling her ? He is revealing the secrets to her ? That is classified .
the detailing of the mission and then shoot out and Love the detailing including the GEOGRAPHY . I wanted to say this earlier , One thing for sure you knows the world geography and world politics very well , The way you weave the plot with real geographical location with real life inspired events, warlords and terrorist outfit , adds extra layer of realism to the story and that makes worth the wait . I dont know if future updates have something like Hemant going to IRAN personally dealing with whoever in charge of Strait of Hormuz or Helping them against Yankees , Selling his tech to Iran to shoot the bird in the skies . lol
And What is with you picking the skinny Bollywood Actress ? PICK some Milfs lol . But dont pick SAMANTHA and Aishwarya RAI . But There is one Bollywood MILF *HEROINE* I think you should use her for GRAND EVENT .
and For Images , First I wanted to say use more Animated or Anime Style Images for MICHAEL KING , The AI generated Images does not have depth and shot is too wide to show the character , But That PIC of HEMANT , in SNOW with Hatchet was so GOOD . His face cut , jaw line, redness because of snow , Uniform and that Hatchet with ROPE was I say PEAK DETAILING . and That eagle flying over the Chopper while Hemant walking
So many things to say about this update , Will write another comment .
But what a wonderful update , 11/10 worth the wait .
I totally enjoyed Hemant's Backstory . Cant wait to read the rest .
Thanks for the update , Man .
I love the way you sequence the events , So Sona knew half of the truth during the post concert Conversation .
and as For Sona ,
I was this close to closing the tab , What a save or else . They are the same Both VIKRAM , He just just going to bang her and she was letting him . No hesitation no nothing . That baby talk was so trash , and If that excites her then it clearly shows where her heart is . I dont why she is doing all the drama , If she dont feel the ick around VIKRAM and still cares for him , and still see him as victim of hers and all the yuck breaking her heart talk , She should stick with him . The Chapter 25 goes directly into the trash . All her progress was just farce and nothing more . She cannot put the two men as equal in her life . If she consider VIKRAM as important as HEMANT , If He makes her think about having a future together then She should stick with VIKRAM , why the shallow hope and fake love for HEMANT , to whom she wants convince ? The way she feels about him , Even in future Hypothetically Whoever she marry or live with She will miss him . There is no scenario where VIKRAM will be just memory for her . Either accept VIKRAM or Sacrifice him both clearly shows She loves him and This is not fair to HEMANT. Either she totally loves Hemant or not . I dont know what happens in upcoming update , But One thing There is going to such a challenge . I wanna see How you gonna do it , If Sona really loves Hemant or not ? Love for Hemant and indifference towards VIKRAM but again what ever you do , I just hope you dont choose that bollywood troupe of that Oh I like them both , But I love him more etc etc .
She is just so Stupid . Anjana said so many things , She was nodding her head like kid . I am afraid tomorrow If DARAKSH approached her , she would believe him too (She is so stupid , Every one is playing her . At this point I dont know If you are rage baiting or not
. The frustration i felt reading that part , clearly the story is working hahaha . That deserves appreciation ) That BITCH MEGHNA , She will neve change , which is good . After all things Hemant did , She is still the same but Good Good . I hope She is not out of Hemant's RADAR .
This VIKRAM character is so irritating and No wonder ARIJIT SINGH is RETIRED probably that was his last concert . I hope DARAKSH just bash his fucking skull . I just hope for once HEMANT just beat the shit out of him .
Leave it .
So New Character , Katherine , Is she relevant to the story ?
NOW , MY FAVORITE PART :- HEMANT's Back Story .
First of all again , I love the way sequence the Flashback with ongoing story . So Sona knows about Hemant while He was doing his mission .
Dan , was in wheelchair , I am curious to know what happened ?
Hemant's Entry and THE FORMATION OF GARUDA was the best part of the story. I felt so excited while reading it .
Why Dan is telling her ? He is revealing the secrets to her ? That is classified .
the detailing of the mission and then shoot out and Love the detailing including the GEOGRAPHY . I wanted to say this earlier , One thing for sure you knows the world geography and world politics very well , The way you weave the plot with real geographical location with real life inspired events, warlords and terrorist outfit , adds extra layer of realism to the story and that makes worth the wait . I dont know if future updates have something like Hemant going to IRAN personally dealing with whoever in charge of Strait of Hormuz or Helping them against Yankees , Selling his tech to Iran to shoot the bird in the skies . lol
And What is with you picking the skinny Bollywood Actress ? PICK some Milfs lol . But dont pick SAMANTHA and Aishwarya RAI . But There is one Bollywood MILF *HEROINE* I think you should use her for GRAND EVENT .
and For Images , First I wanted to say use more Animated or Anime Style Images for MICHAEL KING , The AI generated Images does not have depth and shot is too wide to show the character , But That PIC of HEMANT , in SNOW with Hatchet was so GOOD . His face cut , jaw line, redness because of snow , Uniform and that Hatchet with ROPE was I say PEAK DETAILING . and That eagle flying over the Chopper while Hemant walking
So many things to say about this update , Will write another comment .
But what a wonderful update , 11/10 worth the wait .
I totally enjoyed Hemant's Backstory . Cant wait to read the rest .
Thanks for the update , Man .
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