06-07-2019, 01:11 PM
(06-07-2019, 12:32 PM)thyroid Wrote: Very nicely written. Wished Madhuri's gangbang scene was more descriptive. Erotic. Keep writing.
The story was actually about her and the sailor. The gang bang was a twist in the tale. There will be other more elaborate gang bang stories coming. I have more than 70 written and published on my site.