Adultery Geetha ~ teacher

[Amit2021msm]

What if I completely cancel the Canada part and make it so they never go there at all? I want to keep Gautam in the dark about their situation for now and continue the secret bond between Geetha and Bharat as usual.


I’m thinking of fast-forwarding the story to Bharat’s Intermediate years, where Sindhu finds out about the Geetha-Bharat affair, and then starting a Bharat-Sindhu track.

Honestly, I didn’t like the Canada part. I just wrote it as it came to me in the flow. As for the Geetha-Haran part, we can reconnect them later during the college scenes.


I’m thinking of giving a best feeling when the story ends finally.

Tell your take on this readers?

Please do so as you said above …… Even I don’t like canda trip …and  please move story further.

Canada trip truely defined Geetha character as a true whore and slut and a heartless BITCH. 
It seems Geetha never love Gautham or Bharath it’s purely LUST. ( she forget her family , marriage her parents - Willing to destroy her life just for sex and that unrealistic, that’s totally against her character ) . 
She humiliated her husband In front of a kid and demanding to be with someone else shamelessly. 
Doesn’t care about husband feelings and respect his pride.

She is educated knows the consequences must choose clever partner such as shiva should be more safe after ditching Bharat. Story should gone more longer episodes.


Even Bharath doesn’t love Geetha it also pure lust- if he love her - never let Gautam call her slut and whore….. 

If story goes this way let Gautham get rid off Geetha and let her free . 
No man will allow his wife to get fucked in front of someone unless he is chuck and no women let her husband humiliate in such way even in front her lover(  she let Bharat doing in front of her , that means she doesn’t having any REAL FEELINGS only lust , does she forget what gawthan does / did for the family ) 

Don’t humiliate Gautam more he is the guy just like story in Dhika story . He loves his wife more and give freedom for  little adventurers.

You ultimately made a chuck sorry bro . Not an adultery.

       And change the title - from Geetha to Bharath the college guy . 

There is no justification from the title of your story bro . 

But really appreciate bro your writing skill is awesome ? most of them liked it and it’s just my opinion what I said ?