Adultery Priya Didi

[amol1]

So shailu firstly let me say that you are an incredible writter, u expresses the feelings in writing such is way more beyond imagination.

What went wrong from my side i feel:

1)The story dragged unnecessary long,

I know your story has twists and scenes which are plotted differently, but in Priya didi story we had so much expectations but it got delayed, so the same spark was not alive

2) short multiple updates. - i guess people here love big format means consolidated update

3) u use to mention the imagination (background voice) of characters which somewhere feels more and unnecessary. Except in hot moments

4) i know u don't like this- but u too know maximum audience come here to see intimacy. It should be more and bold. U did in your story but after a long time.



I mentioned what I felt. I didn't wrote more appreciation because u deserves always more..!! You are different from others. Hope you will introspect and will never give up!