29-03-2026, 02:28 AM
(This post was last modified: 19-04-2026, 04:02 PM by haqiqatekamal. Edited 7 times in total. Edited 7 times in total.)
⚠️ Chetawani & Disclaimer (Read Carefully) ⚠️
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Namaste doston,
Kaafi waqt se main dekh raha hoon ki "Bus ka Safar" ya "Neeta - Ek Masoom Housewife" name ki story bahut achhi thi, lekin Yeh ek aisi story rahi hai jise kai kabil writers ne shuru kiya, lekin badkismati se koi bhi ise poora nhi kiya.
Ek reader aur writer ke adhuri story hona zabardast shuruat, lekin adhoora anth. Isliye,
Maine naye sire se likhna shuru kiya hai. or main is baar is kahani ka Final Conclusion (climax) adhoora nhi rhene dunga.
lekin purani story ki kuchh faltu aur bore karne wali baaton ko hata diya hai
Credit & Respect
main saaf kar de rha hun ki is story ka asli Credit iske Original Writer ko hi jata hai. aap sab ki demand per bus ise final tak pahuncha raha hoon.
ummid hai ki viewer or staff support karenge. pichhli kahani kyon ruki, mujhe nhi pata, kisi ne report kiya, ya writer gayab ho gaya. ya kuchh or per main ummid karta hun, ki is kahani ko poora last update tak de saku. lekin agar kisi ko kahani se aapptai hai to report karne ke bajay comment kare ya DM kare, main ise fir se rok dunga.
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Doston, is kahani ko shuru karne se pehle ye baatein apne dimaag mein bitha lein:
ye kahani aur iske saare kirdar poori tarah se kalpanik hain. Iska kisi bhi human se koi lena-dena nahi hai. Sabhi naam, jagah aur ghatnayen sirf ek "Fantasy" hain.
Yeh kahani samaj ke banaye gaye aam niyamon aur maryadaon ke bilkul khilaf hai. Agar aap pariwarik, achche achran wale hain ya fir maan maryada mein bahut zyada yakin rakhte hain, toh isi mat pado.
Is kahani ko sirf ek fantasy ki tarah lein. Ismein likha gaya koi bhi Ganda Aacharan zindagi mein karne ki koshish hargiz na karein. Hum kisi bhi galat kaam ko support nahi karte.
Agar aapko is kahani ke kisi bhi part se koi aapatti hai, toh please ise Report karne ki bajay mujhe Comment ya DM mein apni salah dein. Main ek writer hoon aur baat samajhta hoon.
Agar mujhe authorities ya moderators se is kahani ko band karne ka aadesh mila, toh main bina kuch soche is kahani ko dubara adhoora chhod kar band kar dunga.
is sab ke baad Agar aapko kahani achhi lag rahi hai, toh hausla badhayein! Agar aapke paas koi "Idea" hai, toh zaroor share karein. Agar aapka idea is fantasy plot mein fit baitha, toh main use kahani mein zaroor jagah dunga.
Padhne ke liye Shukriya. Ab shuru karte hain "Bus ka Safar"... 

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Namaste doston,
Kaafi waqt se main dekh raha hoon ki "Bus ka Safar" ya "Neeta - Ek Masoom Housewife" name ki story bahut achhi thi, lekin Yeh ek aisi story rahi hai jise kai kabil writers ne shuru kiya, lekin badkismati se koi bhi ise poora nhi kiya.
Ek reader aur writer ke adhuri story hona zabardast shuruat, lekin adhoora anth. Isliye,
Maine naye sire se likhna shuru kiya hai. or main is baar is kahani ka Final Conclusion (climax) adhoora nhi rhene dunga.
lekin purani story ki kuchh faltu aur bore karne wali baaton ko hata diya hai
Credit & Respect
main saaf kar de rha hun ki is story ka asli Credit iske Original Writer ko hi jata hai. aap sab ki demand per bus ise final tak pahuncha raha hoon.
ummid hai ki viewer or staff support karenge. pichhli kahani kyon ruki, mujhe nhi pata, kisi ne report kiya, ya writer gayab ho gaya. ya kuchh or per main ummid karta hun, ki is kahani ko poora last update tak de saku. lekin agar kisi ko kahani se aapptai hai to report karne ke bajay comment kare ya DM kare, main ise fir se rok dunga.
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