Adultery அவள் இதயத்தின் மொழி

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My first post in this forum coz it would be a sin not to comment here given this is by far one of my all time favorite story. The pacing, teasing, realism - everything is right on point. Not sure how many explored the female's POV of falling in an affair this well, esp the doubts, hesitation and convos she has with her friend which pushes her further. W2g author, highly impressive.!

I do lean more towards Raj-Pavi pair over Prakash, the former has that genuine connection. Pavi does yearn for her husband to be like Raj and in him, she found her perfect companion/the spark that ignites her thirst. Raj also has that masculinity, experience- can push Pavi further without breaking both of their wedding bonds. Prakash being naive or sort of submissive doesn't bode well, might be okay to satisfy some thirsty audience but the passion Raj-Pavi posses is on another level. So please do continue with Pavi-Raj pair, make them fall in love* - the love that doesn't break families rather fuels their lust so they can enjoy each others company their fullest. Unleash Pavi's slutiness so she can be herself with Raj without any shackles or judgement- maybe Raj can teach her a thing or two in bed ;)

Only downside to this story is the length of updates not the pacing, please do make sure you post atleast 2 parts every day/every other day. And if there's action, let that be continous. SCREW the folks who needs Pavi-Prakash combo, they're here only for ahem (jk). This could be an all timer slow burn- challenging english novels but huge kick'eh it's in tamil - sathyama vera level idhu :D. 

I hope you do read all this feedback, not just those negative nancy comments. Big fan again. Waiting. ?

Hell no. If you take the Pavi and Raj connection, it's more of a regular affair story that we see almost every day in the news in modern life — a husband’s boss having an affair with his subordinate’s wife. I don’t think it’s that exciting.
But just look at the Praksha and Pavi combo — that’s the real high-selling point of the story. That lift scene is the perfect example. It’s always exciting to see a well-disciplined married woman falling for an unequal guy, especially when he’s just her apartment security guard.
All of this is just our opinion, though. Let’s see what the author comes up with.