26-03-2026, 10:09 PM
You're a master at navigating characters around, great job with all of them. My opinion is we should be keep sex or sexual seduction atleast in 1 out of 4 chapters. Until now story is more of emotionally drawing her to a zone which husband wanted, we are almost in a place he handed over to suriya, A wife should get sexually drawn or seducted before completely falling emotionally, she might prove shes intelligent as well, never know. As of now, story is very good, it captivated us without sexual tension. Hoping for more chapters, this shouldn't be a quick story after all that build up but author is supreme, its your story. Your AI images are lit, keep them coming.


![[+]](https://xossipy.com/themes/sharepoint/collapse_collapsed.png)