26-03-2026, 08:38 PM
I think this plot really works because of how well you've paced the story. Interesting choice to describe the setting the way you did. Feels like a breath of fresh air. I can tell you are putting a lot of work into this. Love the way you structured it with such a unique perspective & made it so interesting! You are a great storyteller.


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