Misc. Erotica Maa bani Classmate

[Tiger687]

"Main ye sab sunte-sunte thak gaya hoon aur kaafi frustrated hoon. Maine kuch chapters likhe hain, unhe update karne ke baad main is story se break le raha hoon. Ab main apni purani story par focus karoonga kyunki mujhe thoda shant hone ki zaroorat hai.
Main apni taraf se puri koshish kar raha tha ki jaldi aur acche updates doon, par kisi ko uski fikar nahi hai. Sab bas apne hisaab se story chalwana chahte hain aur apna ego satisfy kar rahe hain. Toh theek hai, jaisa aap chahein."

Bhai apko frustrated hone ki jarurat nahi hai. Story likh rahe hon to comments to aayenge. Kuch positive kuch negative. Kuch readers thoda harsh hon kar comment karte hai. Kyunki woh sabh story kon feel kar rahe hai. Bas apko jyada negative comment iss liye aan rahen hain kyuki jyaada tar readers kon Rahul kon Hero ki tarah dekhna hai. Lekin unko story mein aisa feel nahi aa rahaa hain. Apne kahaa ki apne hero decide nahin kiya. Lekin readers kon aisa mehsoos nahin hon rahaa hai. Story mein suspense hona chahiye thaa . Uske regarding readers comment karte. Kya Trupti Abhay ki hogi yaa phir Rahul ki. Lekin story mein suspense kam aur Abhay ken taraf zukav jyaada lag rahaa hai bas. Let it be it's only a suggestion. 

Apko suggestions story improve karne ken liyen lene chaiye. Na ki frustrate hone ken liyen. Mere khayal sen Rahul an team jyaada nirash hon rahe hain. Let it be you go with your on way. 

And I humbly request. Rahul an team. If these story is disappointing you leave it. But don't be harsh with writer. Let him go with his plot. Please Don't give suggestions or comments.