Misc. Erotica Maa bani Classmate

[Dash1]

Maine pehle hi clear kar diya hai ki abhi tak koi hero decide nahi hua hai. Main characters ko depth de raha hoon taaki wo acche lagein. Sirf isliye ki story aapke hisaab se nahi chal rahi, iska matlab ye nahi ki main waisa hi likhoon jaisa aap chahte ho.

Agar yahi baat hai, toh main suggestions lena aur reply dena band kar doonga. Mujhe opinions aur character improvement tips pasand hain, lekin agar aap bullying karoge toh main parwah karna chhod doonga aur itni depth ya emotions ke saath likhna band kar doonga."

@joker44 We are not hating, bullying or want our ego to be satisfied. We just want to give our points of views of the stroy for more detail and improvements that this story might need. This story is single Handley going in a one direction that you know. As you are saying ending is not fixed so there room for more improvement and detailing that you are missing like Viki,Abhay past affairs if he is an alpha and Rahul character build up which is going wasted. Nothing is more pleasurable than getting revenge for humiliation in fiction or in reality. Lots of big writers here and other platforms takes suggestions and opinions of there viewers after writing so many updates already to make story better and interesting and pleasing while maintaining suspense. We are happy with your slow build up , getting upset about viewers constructive criticism is little bit concerning for viewers because they filled undervalued by writer . Story they attached for more than 6 months can't go wasted for anyone ego. So don't feel demovited it viewers nature to give there opinion for there loved story. If story was not good they wouldn't have complained like this . You should know “Without readers to admire it, a story remains only words, not a living tale.”. So keep writing with more positivity and more energy. Always love everyone opinions and suggestions without hate and ego. And in the end, stories live forever through the people who cherish them.