14-03-2026, 11:11 PM
(This post was last modified: 14-03-2026, 11:31 PM by Dash1. Edited 6 times in total. Edited 6 times in total.)
(14-03-2026, 12:55 AM)Joker44 Wrote: Doston, main ek baat clear kar doon—Tripti ko kaun chodega aur kab, woh toh story ka suspense hai aur wo main hi decide karunga. Par abhi mera sawal sirf pacing ko lekar hai:
Mera manna hai ki agar hum thoda aur rukenge, toh excitement aur tension double ho jayegi. Par agar aapko lag raha hai ki main zyada hi slow ja raha hoon, toh batao!
- Fast Pace (Abhi Shuru Karun?): Kya aap chahte ho ki main zyada intezar na karwau aur abhi Tripti ki chudai dikhana shuru kar doon? Bina kisi lambe build-up ke, seedha action par aa jaun?
- Slow & Sexy (Excitement Badhaun?): Ya phir aap chahte ho ki main thoda aur slow chalun? Tripti ko thoda aur tadpaya jaye, uski halat aisi kar di jaye ki wo khud sex ke liye pagal ho jaye, aur phir climax mein uski ghamsaan chudai ho?
@joker44 slow burn story or fast you do according to your wish .people don't give fuck about Abhay or Rahul having sex with Trupti first they just want you to follow a proper path where you don't favour abhay more or declare him as hero subtly. There are 3 or 4 people in the comments section that thinks Abhay is stronger than Rahul I don't know how they think so. Initially Rahul let Trupti have break up with him because he have lot to lose and have to hide his and Trupti original identity where as Viki and Abhay don't have anything to lose at that time that's why it was easy for them to get her not because Rahul was a loser. Having 0.5 inches dick bigger than Rahul doesn't make abhay stronger there other qualities also that make a character stronger than other which Rahul have like roughness ,tone , intention, proper plan while handling girls like Kriti and other.Rahul is a god damm fucking son of a successful business do you think he is a powerless or less stronger guy than Abhay whose father is not rich ,so obviously Rahul is more power and master mind in any sense fictional or in reality than Abhay. Abhay who can't directly confront Viki is showing as alpha and stronger rahul doesn't make sense. Abhay a playboy and alpha that you have portrait till now don't have bad past with other girls or having multiple affairs that doesn't make any sense . Showing him as a true lover is the main joke of this stroy. And Trupti getting emotional about Abhay mom but can't see herself humiliating her son is doesn't make a sense. Rahul character build up such a waste of the stroy plot if it can't be translated it in the actions. Best plot will be humiliation to revenge stroy( redemption arc).No hate to anyone it is just a constructive criticism.


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