14-03-2026, 09:44 PM
(14-03-2026, 12:55 AM)Joker44 Wrote: Doston, main ek baat clear kar doon—Tripti ko kaun chodega aur kab, woh toh story ka suspense hai aur wo main hi decide karunga. Par abhi mera sawal sirf pacing ko lekar hai:
Mera manna hai ki agar hum thoda aur rukenge, toh excitement aur tension double ho jayegi. Par agar aapko lag raha hai ki main zyada hi slow ja raha hoon, toh batao!
- Fast Pace (Abhi Shuru Karun?): Kya aap chahte ho ki main zyada intezar na karwau aur abhi Tripti ki chudai dikhana shuru kar doon? Bina kisi lambe build-up ke, seedha action par aa jaun?
- Slow & Sexy (Excitement Badhaun?): Ya phir aap chahte ho ki main thoda aur slow chalun? Tripti ko thoda aur tadpaya jaye, uski halat aisi kar di jaye ki wo khud sex ke liye pagal ho jaye, aur phir climax mein uski ghamsaan chudai ho?
Bhai apki writing skill awesome hain. Lekin story sach mein galat direction mein ja rahi hai. Is story ka Hero Rahul hi rahata to acha hota. Ye ek heart touching love story banti. These is my suggestion.
Story jitna Abhay aur Trupti ke irad girad ghumegi. Mere khayal se spoil hogi. Aur shayad ye story jyaada tar reader Rahul aur Trupti ken liyen hi padh rahen hain. AUR EK REQUEST HAI BHAI. NEXT UPDATE JALDI DO AUR AAGE STORY KONSE WAY MEIN JAAYEGI READERS KON BATA DO.MERE KHAYAL SE BOHOT SARE READER NIRASH HON GAYE HAI. DEKHO AUR BHI BOHOT INCEST AUR CUCK STORIES HAI. PARANTU IS STORY KI KYA DEMAND HAI YE JADA MAYANE RAKHATA HAI


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