A Banana Muffin Saga

[RCF]

Respect the honesty, Sir,

Glad to see a veteran critic like you finally weighing in on this story after 70+ chapters.

I totally get the preference - seduction is a slow dance, while blackmail is a sledgehammer. But there’s a flip side to consider. I personally know that YLTS as a writer have spent massive amount of time and thoughts into these plots to keep the momentum going for 76 chapters and from what I see, a lot more to come. 

It’s a bit of a curveball when an avid reader stays silent through all the parts they liked, only to drop an admonishing note the second the story pushes a boundary they personally don't favor. When a seasoned critic only posts the 'negatives' it can lead new and old readers to judge the entire effort unfairly without seeing the full picture.

You're absolutely right, I agree totally. it’s a free world and democracy rules here. You’re more than welcome to your opinion. 

But in that same spirit of transparency, since you've been here for the long haul, why not share which parts or arcs actually entertained you the most?

It would give the rest of the community a chance to appreciate the effort from both sides, the writing of YLTS and the time you took to read rather than just focusing on the current 'humiliation' phase. If you've stuck around this long, there’s clearly something about Tanvi’s journey that resonates with you. Let’s hear the good with the 'bad'.

As for her future? Stick around. The 'breaking' is the peak of the storm, but the fallout is where the real story lives.

Cheers.

You have totally misunderstood the context with out knowing when I read the story. I started this story long time back but due to the story being delay on updates or might be me being busy I left it, it probably was somewhere around chapter 15-20..Then I came back once and read our favorite writer was no more...felt sad and thought that this story will not move forward and very recently I realized you have been updating it with the notes provided by author and my interest picked again and read it in one go..so I did not get lot of chance to be with the story to appreciate it as it went along with chapter to chapter. 

Best parts of the story still are gym sessions between Khurram and Tanvi with awesome descriptions of those scenes and their sexellent exercises. No one who is writing comments here think the efforts are any less and the hard work put into any story here definitely needs applause but negative comments are part of parcel, do not let that discourage you to continue the journey. I will finish the story this time and will comment time to time, Only comment mine was negative because by the time I am back it went to the phase where the flavor of the story is not cup of tea. so do not take it to heart. 

As always appreciate the work...


~RCF