A Banana Muffin Saga

[Aavesh9]

Understood and not denying the fact that this was once my favorite story. I still feel its a over all very good story compared to so many "old man bends young women to his will" story template but I prefer seduction over blackmail any day and that's just me. Nothing wrong with opinions and choices.

Hope there is redemption arc for Tanvi and teaches all old men of her community a lesson at the end or destroy them else it becomes an overkill of humiliation and nothing else.

~RCF

Respect the honesty, Sir,

Glad to see a veteran critic like you finally weighing in on this story after 70+ chapters.

I totally get the preference - seduction is a slow dance, while blackmail is a sledgehammer. But there’s a flip side to consider. I personally know that YLTS as a writer have spent massive amount of time and thoughts into these plots to keep the momentum going for 76 chapters and from what I see, a lot more to come. 

It’s a bit of a curveball when an avid reader stays silent through all the parts they liked, only to drop an admonishing note the second the story pushes a boundary they personally don't favor. When a seasoned critic only posts the 'negatives' it can lead new and old readers to judge the entire effort unfairly without seeing the full picture.

You're absolutely right, I agree totally. it’s a free world and democracy rules here. You’re more than welcome to your opinion. 

But in that same spirit of transparency, since you've been here for the long haul, why not share which parts or arcs actually entertained you the most?

It would give the rest of the community a chance to appreciate the effort from both sides, the writing of YLTS and the time you took to read rather than just focusing on the current 'humiliation' phase. If you've stuck around this long, there’s clearly something about Tanvi’s journey that resonates with you. Let’s hear the good with the 'bad'.

As for her future? Stick around. The 'breaking' is the peak of the storm, but the fallout is where the real story lives.

Cheers.