11-03-2026, 10:50 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-03-2026, 09:15 AM by hibrid1. Edited 4 times in total. Edited 4 times in total.)
Ab aage...
Archana (mirror ke saamne khadi, apne lehenge ke pallu ko dheere se neeche girate hue, halki si hasi ke saath) - "Niyati... tu bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Ab yeh haveli, yeh log... sab mera khel hain. Bas thoda sa intezaar... saasuma bhi aa rahi hongi ab tak."
Tabhi bahar se seedhiyon ki awaaz aayi. Manjula devi tezi se upar chadh rahi thi, haath mein woh kali potli tightly pakde hue. Uske chehre par ghabrahat thi, par saath hi ek ajeeb si jidd bhi – jaise woh apni bahu ko "bachaane" ke naam par kuchh bada karne ko taiyaar ho.
Manjula ne darwaze par zor se dastak di.
Manjula devi (sakht awaaz mein) - "Archana! Bahuraani! Ab bas karo yeh nautanki. Darwaza kholo jaldi se! Pushp arpan ho chuka, sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Aur yeh kya bakwaas kar rahi ho andar? Awaaz bilkul badal gayi hai tumhari!"
Andar se pehle chuppi, phir dheemi, madhur, lekin bilkul nangi si awaaz aayi.
Archana - "Aa rahi hoon... saasuma. Bas thodi der aur. Aap itni jaldi kyun kar rahi hain? Kya itna bura lag raha hai ki aapki bahuraani thodi si masti kar rahi hai?"
Manjula devi ka chehra laal ho gaya. Usne potli kholi, tel ki shishi nikali aur darwaze ke neeche se thoda sa tel andar ki taraf chhidka, jaise koi purana totka kar rahi ho.
Manjula devi (zor se) - "Bahuraani suno! Yeh tel laga lo maathe par. Baba ji ne kaha hai yeh tumhe buri nazar se bachayega. Jaldi se darwaza kholo, warna main yahin se chillati hoon poori haveli ko!"
Andar se ek lambi hasi goonji – ab yeh hasi bilkul Archana ki nahi thi. Yeh wohi gehri, shaitani hasi thi jo pehle darwaze ke knob ke saath aayi thi...
Niyati ki awaaz (archana ki muh se oar dire se taki manjula devi dire se sune aur confuse rahe)- "Saasuma... aap bahut pyari hain. Bahuraani ko itna pyaar... lekin yeh tel? Yeh toh mere liye nahi bana. Yeh toh aapke liye hai... taaki aap dekh sako jo hone wala hai. "
Manjula devi -pta nhi ye bahuraani,kya badbada rahi hai, kamre ke andar....
Lekin ab, Achanak darwaza khud hi dheere-dheere khulne laga. Knob ab tight nahi tha – jaise kisi ne andar se hi chhod diya ho.
Darwaza khulte hi Manjula devi ne dekha – Archana bilkul taiyaar khadi thi. Par yeh wahi Archana nahi thi jo kal tak sharmili dulhan thi. Uske baal khule the, aankhon mein ek aag si chamak rahi thi, aur lehenga itna neeche gira hua tha ki uski kamar aur navel saaf dikh rahe the. Haathon mein abhi bhi thoda sa tel laga hua tha – par woh tel usne apne sharir par malish karne ke liye istemal kiya tha, jaise koi tel malish kar rahi ho.
Archana (muskurate hue, dheere se paas aate hue) - "Saasuma... aap fikar mat karo. Main bilkul theek hoon. Bas... thoda sa naya roop dikhana chahti hoon aaj. Aapke saath, sasur ji ke saath... aur poori haveli ke saath."
Manjula devi peeche hati, uske haathon se shishi girne wali thi.
Manjula devi (ghabra kar) - "Yeh... yeh kya bakwas hai bahuraani? Tum... tum bilkul badal gayi ho. Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"
Archana (ek kadam aur aage badhte hue, awaaz mein masti bhar kar) - "Niyati ho rahi hai, saasuma. Jo hona tha, woh ho raha hai. Ab aap niche chaliye... main bhi aa rahi hoon. Aaj pushp arpan nahi... asli puja hogi. Aur is baar... main khud pushp arpan karungi... sabke saamne."
Manjula devi ka munh khula reh gaya. Woh kuchh bol nahi paayi. Archana ne uske haath se potli cheen li, usmein se thoda sa tel apni ungliyon par liya aur apne honthon par laga liya – jaise lipstick laga rahi ho"
Archana - "Chaliye saasuma... niche sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Aur aaj se... yeh haveli meri hai. Niyati ne yeh faisla kar diya hai."
Manjula devi ko ajib laga phir socti huyi -kya ho gya hai, humari bahuraani ko, jarrur kisi buri sakti ne bahuraani ko apne prabav me kar leyi ho...
Ab,Woh dono seedhiyan utarne lagi.aage Archana, piche uski saas manjula devi,Niche Ballu Baba khada tha, muskurata hua, jaise sab kuchh jaanta ho. Bhanupratap aur baaki log bhi abhi tak wahi the, pushp arpan ke baad bhi.
Archana ne niche aate hi sabki taraf dekha – uski nazar sabse pehle Karim chacha par gayi, jo kone mein khada tha, aankhen jhuki hui thi. Phir usne Ballu Baba ki taraf dekha aur muskurayi...
Karim (dire se, fusfusate huye) - "Baba ji... aapka tel bahut acha kaam kar raha hai. Ab asli khel shuru hoga haveli me"
Ballu Baba ne sirf muskuraya... aur dheere se bola – "Niyati apna rasta chun leti hai karim,Ab dekhte hain... kaun kiska gulam banta hai."
Rangin haveli ki Kahani ab aur gehri hone wali hai...NAYATI ka agla naya khel kya rachne wali hai
Ab aage kya hone wala hai? Archana ka agla kadam kya hoga?kya karim chacha aur ballu baba sath me mile huye hain??
![[Image: image-252.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/BVg5wXKx/image-252.jpg)
(Archana, dulhan ki libas me, yash se shadi ke samay ka pic, car me)
Ballu Baba ka asli plan kya ho sakta hai? Ab Manjula devi kuchh karne ki koshish karegi??aur shanta kha gyi??
Archana (mirror ke saamne khadi, apne lehenge ke pallu ko dheere se neeche girate hue, halki si hasi ke saath) - "Niyati... tu bilkul sahi keh rahi hai. Ab yeh haveli, yeh log... sab mera khel hain. Bas thoda sa intezaar... saasuma bhi aa rahi hongi ab tak."
Tabhi bahar se seedhiyon ki awaaz aayi. Manjula devi tezi se upar chadh rahi thi, haath mein woh kali potli tightly pakde hue. Uske chehre par ghabrahat thi, par saath hi ek ajeeb si jidd bhi – jaise woh apni bahu ko "bachaane" ke naam par kuchh bada karne ko taiyaar ho.
Manjula ne darwaze par zor se dastak di.
Manjula devi (sakht awaaz mein) - "Archana! Bahuraani! Ab bas karo yeh nautanki. Darwaza kholo jaldi se! Pushp arpan ho chuka, sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Aur yeh kya bakwaas kar rahi ho andar? Awaaz bilkul badal gayi hai tumhari!"
Andar se pehle chuppi, phir dheemi, madhur, lekin bilkul nangi si awaaz aayi.
Archana - "Aa rahi hoon... saasuma. Bas thodi der aur. Aap itni jaldi kyun kar rahi hain? Kya itna bura lag raha hai ki aapki bahuraani thodi si masti kar rahi hai?"
Manjula devi ka chehra laal ho gaya. Usne potli kholi, tel ki shishi nikali aur darwaze ke neeche se thoda sa tel andar ki taraf chhidka, jaise koi purana totka kar rahi ho.
Manjula devi (zor se) - "Bahuraani suno! Yeh tel laga lo maathe par. Baba ji ne kaha hai yeh tumhe buri nazar se bachayega. Jaldi se darwaza kholo, warna main yahin se chillati hoon poori haveli ko!"
Andar se ek lambi hasi goonji – ab yeh hasi bilkul Archana ki nahi thi. Yeh wohi gehri, shaitani hasi thi jo pehle darwaze ke knob ke saath aayi thi...
Niyati ki awaaz (archana ki muh se oar dire se taki manjula devi dire se sune aur confuse rahe)- "Saasuma... aap bahut pyari hain. Bahuraani ko itna pyaar... lekin yeh tel? Yeh toh mere liye nahi bana. Yeh toh aapke liye hai... taaki aap dekh sako jo hone wala hai. "
Manjula devi -pta nhi ye bahuraani,kya badbada rahi hai, kamre ke andar....
Lekin ab, Achanak darwaza khud hi dheere-dheere khulne laga. Knob ab tight nahi tha – jaise kisi ne andar se hi chhod diya ho.
Darwaza khulte hi Manjula devi ne dekha – Archana bilkul taiyaar khadi thi. Par yeh wahi Archana nahi thi jo kal tak sharmili dulhan thi. Uske baal khule the, aankhon mein ek aag si chamak rahi thi, aur lehenga itna neeche gira hua tha ki uski kamar aur navel saaf dikh rahe the. Haathon mein abhi bhi thoda sa tel laga hua tha – par woh tel usne apne sharir par malish karne ke liye istemal kiya tha, jaise koi tel malish kar rahi ho.
Archana (muskurate hue, dheere se paas aate hue) - "Saasuma... aap fikar mat karo. Main bilkul theek hoon. Bas... thoda sa naya roop dikhana chahti hoon aaj. Aapke saath, sasur ji ke saath... aur poori haveli ke saath."
Manjula devi peeche hati, uske haathon se shishi girne wali thi.
Manjula devi (ghabra kar) - "Yeh... yeh kya bakwas hai bahuraani? Tum... tum bilkul badal gayi ho. Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?"
Archana (ek kadam aur aage badhte hue, awaaz mein masti bhar kar) - "Niyati ho rahi hai, saasuma. Jo hona tha, woh ho raha hai. Ab aap niche chaliye... main bhi aa rahi hoon. Aaj pushp arpan nahi... asli puja hogi. Aur is baar... main khud pushp arpan karungi... sabke saamne."
Manjula devi ka munh khula reh gaya. Woh kuchh bol nahi paayi. Archana ne uske haath se potli cheen li, usmein se thoda sa tel apni ungliyon par liya aur apne honthon par laga liya – jaise lipstick laga rahi ho"
Archana - "Chaliye saasuma... niche sab intezaar kar rahe hain. Aur aaj se... yeh haveli meri hai. Niyati ne yeh faisla kar diya hai."
Manjula devi ko ajib laga phir socti huyi -kya ho gya hai, humari bahuraani ko, jarrur kisi buri sakti ne bahuraani ko apne prabav me kar leyi ho...
Ab,Woh dono seedhiyan utarne lagi.aage Archana, piche uski saas manjula devi,Niche Ballu Baba khada tha, muskurata hua, jaise sab kuchh jaanta ho. Bhanupratap aur baaki log bhi abhi tak wahi the, pushp arpan ke baad bhi.
Archana ne niche aate hi sabki taraf dekha – uski nazar sabse pehle Karim chacha par gayi, jo kone mein khada tha, aankhen jhuki hui thi. Phir usne Ballu Baba ki taraf dekha aur muskurayi...
Karim (dire se, fusfusate huye) - "Baba ji... aapka tel bahut acha kaam kar raha hai. Ab asli khel shuru hoga haveli me"
Ballu Baba ne sirf muskuraya... aur dheere se bola – "Niyati apna rasta chun leti hai karim,Ab dekhte hain... kaun kiska gulam banta hai."
Rangin haveli ki Kahani ab aur gehri hone wali hai...NAYATI ka agla naya khel kya rachne wali hai
Ab aage kya hone wala hai? Archana ka agla kadam kya hoga?kya karim chacha aur ballu baba sath me mile huye hain??
![[Image: image-252.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/BVg5wXKx/image-252.jpg)
(Archana, dulhan ki libas me, yash se shadi ke samay ka pic, car me)
Ballu Baba ka asli plan kya ho sakta hai? Ab Manjula devi kuchh karne ki koshish karegi??aur shanta kha gyi??


![[+]](https://xossipy.com/themes/sharepoint/collapse_collapsed.png)