Siva - Gayatri Raj

[Rocky@handsome]

Please share your feedback on the story, as I am writing here first time, it will be very much helpful for any improvements.

- Venkatesh

The story is progressing beautifully, and I must say, your writing style is truly exceptional. 

The way you’ve depicted Raj’s internal struggle is masterful. You have captured the complex spectrum of his emotions for Gayathri —ranging from deep-rooted respect for his brother-like friend’s wife to an intense, ever-growing obsession.

The battle between his (Raj's) moral guilt and his rising lust for Sweta is portrayed with such balance that it feels incredibly raw and real. It’s fascinating to see how his obsession is slowly blurring the lines of his conscience, with desire finally starting to overshadow his guilt. You’ve maintained this emotional equilibrium perfectly across all the chapters so far.

However, I have a small request that I believe would take this narrative to the next level: I am very curious to understand Gayathri's perspective. What is going through her mind during these moments? Exploring her inner feelings and hidden emotions would add a whole new layer of depth to the plot. I am eagerly looking forward to seeing her(Gayathri 's)thoughts unfold in the upcoming parts.

Please try to provide regular updates! A story this gripping deserves to keep its momentum going. I’m anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Once again, kudos to your amazing storytelling!!


Regards 
Rocky ❤️