10-03-2026, 02:42 AM
What a marvelous update . Every time , Harry . You are just ascending with every update .
That foursome scene is very good . Now I understand you state earlier you are trying to write scene involved with two actress but you gave us bonus with FOURSOME scene . It was so good .
The Action , I was missing it . I love the gruesome death scene . How MK does not hold himself when it comes to kill his enemy and I want more
.
The ENDING was one of the great part of the entire story .
SONARIKA really got some guts speaking to MK about failing of their Marriage .
I hope when the confrontation scene come , MK does not hold himself , for the sake of maintaining the DECORUM .
and Finally be free from HEMANT?
So what happens now ? Is HEMANT gonna cease to exist ? Now that everyone Knows the TRUTH , does MK now be in his True self ? Was HEMANT ever existed ? Was there really a HEMANT or MK was just pretending to be some one else .
If I have to Choose I would choose HEMANT over MK . I see them as Two complete Individual . Hemant should be the person MK wanted to be .
and as SONA .
I dont know how she knows the truth ?
It cannot be MK's Mentor , ( thought MK just told He was in love with her Mentor's daughter , So this is like any bollywood movie scene )
But I think it would be VIKRAM who would have revealed Hemant's true Identity , so he can sway SONA from Hemant .
As for Sona , we need to understand from her point of view. She is an average middle class women , for her to know that the man she slept and had kid was not a simply a man hiding his identity but Very dangerous Psychopathic Man , who butcher half of dozen of people everyday ( again as a reader we know the his truth but She does not know MK ) . The man who terrorize the mafia of half world .
He never confessed to her , but SONA did confessed her cheating to him . She accepted her fault but HEMANT never did , that makes him coward and He could have told her any time . Directly or Indirectly He did bring danger to her kid and her family , though he saved them too and now his truth is out , Enemies in future will target his family .
She married a common man not MK , So her anger or what ever she is gonna do with him is some what justifiable . Just because he was good father and husband , did not cheat , would not absolve his fault .
Just like HEMANT thought that SONA never loved , SONA could also feel the same . The Man who has done lot of shit , is definitely capable of fooling her too .
Yes , She cheated but HEMANT's hiding his past is not something one should ignore or see it as irrelevant issue or even downplaying it would be wrong thing .
We have talked about this earlier , And Many members said earlier , That Hemant's hiding his past is much bigger issue than SONA's cheating and Now I agree with it .
I mean as they say every Saint has past and every sinner has a future . Hemant cannot plays a saint unless He accepts that he is a sinner too .
And comparing too , SONA's Sin , Hemant's was bigger . Burying your past does not mean You dont own it . He did not give Sona's chance to choose . Sona cheated but Hemant too . She is paying for her SINS and Now It is Hemant's Time to pay for his .
Again , Wonderful Update harry . The ending was great . I would love to read Sona's disbelief or confusion or what ever she felt when she learned the truth about Her husband or MK .
Would not she afraid of Such a Man who terrorize the biggest Mafias of world .
I hope you write more scenes of SONA x HEMANT . I missed them , So many updates and no scenes of them together . Now here finally , They gonna meet , Can you please increase the length of next Chapters . Just write more dialogues of them . Anything them fighting , cussing , anything , Just please write a paragraph of SONA X HEMANT and if there is little bit possibility of them
, There is something call HATEFUCKING so maybe maybe maybe .
Harry . And I agree with your point of Posting updates on SATURDAY NIGHT ( just make it extra worth the wait ) . 
12/10.1 extra for Foursome and other 1 for SONA's Return
You are the BEST HARRY
That foursome scene is very good . Now I understand you state earlier you are trying to write scene involved with two actress but you gave us bonus with FOURSOME scene . It was so good .
The Action , I was missing it . I love the gruesome death scene . How MK does not hold himself when it comes to kill his enemy and I want more
. The ENDING was one of the great part of the entire story .
SONARIKA really got some guts speaking to MK about failing of their Marriage .
I hope when the confrontation scene come , MK does not hold himself , for the sake of maintaining the DECORUM .
and Finally be free from HEMANT?
So what happens now ? Is HEMANT gonna cease to exist ? Now that everyone Knows the TRUTH , does MK now be in his True self ? Was HEMANT ever existed ? Was there really a HEMANT or MK was just pretending to be some one else .
If I have to Choose I would choose HEMANT over MK . I see them as Two complete Individual . Hemant should be the person MK wanted to be .
and as SONA .
I dont know how she knows the truth ?
It cannot be MK's Mentor , ( thought MK just told He was in love with her Mentor's daughter , So this is like any bollywood movie scene
) But I think it would be VIKRAM who would have revealed Hemant's true Identity , so he can sway SONA from Hemant .
As for Sona , we need to understand from her point of view. She is an average middle class women , for her to know that the man she slept and had kid was not a simply a man hiding his identity but Very dangerous Psychopathic Man , who butcher half of dozen of people everyday ( again as a reader we know the his truth but She does not know MK ) . The man who terrorize the mafia of half world .
He never confessed to her , but SONA did confessed her cheating to him . She accepted her fault but HEMANT never did , that makes him coward and He could have told her any time . Directly or Indirectly He did bring danger to her kid and her family , though he saved them too and now his truth is out , Enemies in future will target his family .
She married a common man not MK , So her anger or what ever she is gonna do with him is some what justifiable . Just because he was good father and husband , did not cheat , would not absolve his fault .
Just like HEMANT thought that SONA never loved , SONA could also feel the same . The Man who has done lot of shit , is definitely capable of fooling her too .
Yes , She cheated but HEMANT's hiding his past is not something one should ignore or see it as irrelevant issue or even downplaying it would be wrong thing .
We have talked about this earlier , And Many members said earlier , That Hemant's hiding his past is much bigger issue than SONA's cheating and Now I agree with it .
I mean as they say every Saint has past and every sinner has a future . Hemant cannot plays a saint unless He accepts that he is a sinner too .
And comparing too , SONA's Sin , Hemant's was bigger . Burying your past does not mean You dont own it . He did not give Sona's chance to choose . Sona cheated but Hemant too . She is paying for her SINS and Now It is Hemant's Time to pay for his .
Again , Wonderful Update harry . The ending was great . I would love to read Sona's disbelief or confusion or what ever she felt when she learned the truth about Her husband or MK .
Would not she afraid of Such a Man who terrorize the biggest Mafias of world .
I hope you write more scenes of SONA x HEMANT . I missed them , So many updates and no scenes of them together . Now here finally , They gonna meet , Can you please increase the length of next Chapters . Just write more dialogues of them . Anything them fighting , cussing , anything , Just please write a paragraph of SONA X HEMANT and if there is little bit possibility of them
, There is something call HATEFUCKING so maybe maybe maybe . Harry . And I agree with your point of Posting updates on SATURDAY NIGHT ( just make it extra worth the wait ) . 12/10.1 extra for Foursome and other 1 for SONA's Return
You are the BEST HARRY
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