06-03-2026, 05:28 AM
(06-03-2026, 05:16 AM)BigBlackBull Wrote: Buddy you are such good writer.But if you need suggestion. I would like to say. Make it triangle love story.with feelings emotions aggression hard-core sex.Rahul and Abhay both try to full fill there desires.
I am trying to say. Add angle that trupti feels . Distance is growing between mother son relationship.She is giving more attention and love to Abhay . Because of these Rahul is distancing from her. And star a new war between Abhay and Rahul. Make step by step her lover and son both of them to fuck her. And star of the story Rahul said that if vikki not fuck the beautiful girl of the college.then he will fuck her. And you already add in story there 3 heros in these story.
And These not Incest and Adultery.Dont make it cuck or incest keep it .mix erotic.and don't get trupti marry any of them.she will be Sanjeevs wife who loves her very much.
And please reveal trupti by her friend kriti. That her ex boyfriend Rahul is still loving her. He always has his eyes on her.and she watch sadness on his face.while she getting closer to Abhay.and aslo make a scene emotional erotic between trupti and Rahul and some soft romance. It will star story new fase.triangle love story. War between Rahul and Abhay.and college fest add trupti teams once with Rahul and once with Abhay.and finally it will good that trupti remain with her real husband and son Rahul and Abhay will stay as a friend


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