06-03-2026, 05:16 AM
(06-03-2026, 02:05 AM)Ravi1991 Wrote: Bro. abhi tak story ko aapne bina kisi ke suggestion ke achhe se aage bdya h, ab bhi aap story ko apne hisab se aage bdao. Mujhe apki writing skills aur imagination pr pura bharosa h
Buddy you are such good writer.But if you need suggestion. I would like to say. Make it triangle love story.with feelings emotions aggression hard-core sex.Rahul and Abhay both try to full fill there desires.
I am trying to say. Add angle that trupti feels . Distance is growing between mother son relationship.She is giving more attention and love to Abhay . Because of these Rahul is distancing from her. And star a new war between Abhay and Rahul. Make step by step her lover and son both of them to fuck her. And star of the story Rahul said that if vikki not fuck the beautiful girl of the college.then he will fuck her. And you already add in story there 3 heros in these story.
And These not Incest and Adultery.Dont make it cuck or incest keep it .mix erotic.and don't get trupti marry any of them.she will be Sanjeevs wife who loves her very much.


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