Misc. Erotica ...And My Mother doesn't Remain Ours

[garamrohan]

Bravo Rohan! Very well written updates so far.  The story is moving at a proper pace, and that’s so cool. Hope it’s all to set up the stage. 

No need to hurry up with the “Actions”. You’re doing well… keep it up. I know with the continuity of this story, you (& readers) might come up with various ideas/kinks. At that time, it would be far better to stick with the initial idea (plan) you had when starting this story. This story definitely has the potential to become something different, rather than be another ‘bang bang’ story.

The only suggestion I would like to make here is that the dialogues would feel more realistic if you wrote them in Marathi alongside the English. (One of them always in bracket, of course.)

But do this only if you have time, otherwise it's good only in English also. 

Once again, keep it up. Keep writing and surprising us. 

Thank you The_Writer bro for the comment, and yeah, as always I have some plan in head how the story will progress and end, so will try to incorporate suggestions from you readers ensuring the initial structure remains intact.

Hey and your suggestion to include Marathi dialogs surprised me. I personally enjoy different languages, dialects and cultures and try to bring that element in stories if possible. I have done that in The Artist Within story where a Bengali family was involved. 

But I am not sure if people do really appreciate reading dialogues in a non-hindi regional language, but I can definitely give it a try. 

By the way, as far as I remember, I never once mentioned this is happening in Maharashtra. What made you think its a story of a Marathi family?