Adultery Mirna – Vikram's Innocent Hotwife [COMPLETED]

[heygiwriter]

This is one of my favorite story i have written. I was surprised when i saw how the character Mirnaa shaped up. 

The initial idea when started writing was like , how an innocent and naive wife, who is loyal had been tricked by own wife into adultery for the husbands revenge. The aftermath, he realize she is emotionally navigating and attaching towards her lover. So husband uses trick again and get back her with a punishment that she will scare to go behind her lover again. But in the process, their love they had for each other stood solid. Making the unthinkable happen, the extend they go, still they get back through love. But the awakening of sexual desires stayed unshaken. Husband realizes it and At the end, they embraces open marriage and the love just keep increasing. 

This was the plot i started working 
I have setup ready, the fast-forward - flashback setup ready

But as i started writing the flashback,  i was surprised to see i unintentionally created a so strong connection between two souls, from then i myself faced too many conflicts and adjustment towards the story.  i tried my level best not dilute it make it in a decent tray. 

Giving her the much needed sexual awakening - I made it through Goa Episodes. 
Giving an idea of she still has strong desire - Used as a hidden layer when she stay with Bharath after all truth explored 

I have avoided a lot of elements i originally planned
almost 15 chapters i have deleted, introduced new.. as i wanted to see the couple have atleast good ending.


I tried my level best to give a good pay off for each character.


Let me know your thought, What you all have expected does it come little closer to it?