04-03-2026, 08:10 PM
(04-03-2026, 07:17 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: Its fair point, but its not that way ..when i started the story my intention was to make the couple go open relationship.. its because of the character dimensions keep changing.. i started limiting that don't navgiate to open. From innocent pure, to understanding and open. that was the original goal.Looking back at the narrative arc, the first part of this drama was dominated entirely by Bharat—he was portrayed as the singular 'hero' while Vikram remained in the shadows. In the second part, the focus shifted entirely to Mirnaa; she became the ultimate warrior, with every other character merely dancing to her tune. In both chapters, Vikram was sidelined.
It is high time to accord Vikram the respect he deserves. He needs to emerge from the periphery, take the lead, and finally be the hero of his own story. More importantly, Mirnaa needs to realize that Vikram possesses a strength and power she has dangerously underestimated. He is not just a safety net; he is her equal, and perhaps even her superior in resilience.
Furthermore, I feel strongly that steering this couple toward an 'open marriage' would be a profound mistake. It would strip away the unique essence of their bond( Vikram and Mirnaa)and turn this into just another mediocre, clichéd story like so many others.
We have already seen the depth of Vikram and Mirnaa’s love, their mutual sacrifices, and the profound care and respect they share. They are perfect souls meant only for each other. Their connection is sacred; there is simply no room for a third person to bridge the space between two souls that belong together so completely.
Ultimately, this is your story, and the final pen is in your hand. I only hope to see Vikram finally stand in the light he deserves. I hereby rest my case, as I have no right to interfere with your visionary creation.
Regards,
Rocky ❤️



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