04-03-2026, 12:45 AM
Good story.
I know you don't have to, but please don't stop writing this story after a few updates like others do. Slow updates are fine.
I'm confused about one part. Is Ayesha dancing or sitting? For example: 'Ayesha's eyes fluttered shut, her head tipping back against the couch' and 'On the couch, Samar had shifted closer, his palm splayed possessively over Ayesha's knee'. When did they stop dancing and sit down? Maybe I missed it. Just checking. I really like the story.
I know you don't have to, but please don't stop writing this story after a few updates like others do. Slow updates are fine.
I'm confused about one part. Is Ayesha dancing or sitting? For example: 'Ayesha's eyes fluttered shut, her head tipping back against the couch' and 'On the couch, Samar had shifted closer, his palm splayed possessively over Ayesha's knee'. When did they stop dancing and sit down? Maybe I missed it. Just checking. I really like the story.


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