Adultery The Forbidden Relief – My Wife's Secret

[GoriDoodhwali166]

This has got to be one of, if not THE best story I've ever read. Maybe it's because it mirrors my own self and fantasies or maybe it's the slow and deep build-up of the plot and character arcs...or maybe it's both. The way you describe Simran's engorged lactating breasts, and the way Bhola worships them, it's just so erotic and engaging that I feel like I'm inside the story in a way that I don't even realize that I'm reading it. I don't have many suggestions or criticisms to offer, but I feel like Bhola is a little too innocent and naive. I mean, even if he doesn't know much about the naughty and erotic aspect of what they're doing, I feel like he should still suffer and struggle from the sexual hunger that he would naturally feel, being a young man that he is, because no matter how innocent or disciplined he might be, instinct is still a very powerful thing. Also, the guilt and conflict that Simran feels from all this is necessary, even though it might feel annoying to the readers at times, but no married woman would feel a-okay with having her breasts suckled and manhandled by someone other than her husband, assuming the woman is not an amoral and slutty character to begin with. The friction is what adds so much depth to her character and her arc in the story. The orgasmic relief and the instinctive pull she feels from Bhola as she shudders when Bhola's manhood rubs against her as he sucks her leaking tits like a hungry animal, and the shame that she feels after things get a chance to cool down a little, as she tries to justify what is happening, how she's hiding such a thing that would surely destroy her marriage, but a thing she so desperately needs, and is beginning to want more and more with each occurrence, the resistance is what will make this story great and set it clear and high of all the "good" ones. So don't try to rush to a climax or even a turning point in the story just yet, but don't let it become repetitive and boring either imo. Small but risky steps, and always flirting with the edges. All the while her husband is unwittingly getting conditioned into a cuck-ish role by his own hand, I feel like you can expand a bit more on that, but don't turn him into a super-cuck over night, start with intense jealousy and even anger at first, but with a spark of arousal (which is already there, I guess), and don't let him turn into an oblivious bystander in the story, surely he should notice some changes or unusual behaviours in his wife, her being out of breath as if being caught while doing something wrong, the disinterest and tiredness she'd she show in bed after orgasming again and again to near exhaustion because of Bhola, finding her ruined panties, his phone calls not being answered, things of those nature. Finally, some ideas for the future or near-future; Simran going out with Bhola, maybe to buy groceries or some shopping because of her husband not being available due to work or whatever, and it turning it into a kind of date, Bhola being more assertive and dominant over time while suckling from Simran. Highlighting the differences between Simran and Bhola, tones of class struggle, raceplay, masculinity vs femininity. Bhola to start using 'Tu' instead of 'Aap', and becoming a bit more crass and vulgar in his language as a whole (as far as what I understand from my limited understanding of Hindi), some things happening which might not be strictly to do with breastfeeding, like maybe Bhola's hands wandering to Simran's waist or ass instead of being confined just to her breasts, Bhola kissing Simran's breasts and nipples in the heat of passion (Simran should show a little reluctance and objection to it, would add to the friction and sense of reality), some themes of consensual non-consent (Bhola rubbing his manhood on Simran's ass while groping and squeezing her leaking tits from behind, or groping and suckling Simran's boobs out of sheer hunger and lust even though Simran might be telling him not (but secretly loving it against her own will) to because of the proximity of her husband or the way Bhola is going about it). Lol, I thought I was just going to write a short post, and here I am, lost in thoughts and imaginations. I hope you like what I had to say, and I would love to share more of my ideas for the story if would have them, at least that's what I wish for since our fetishes and fantasies seem to be so eerily similar. I literally made an account just to post how much I LOVE this story so I guess that's a massive compliment in itself lol.