Incest கூமாப்பட்டி மர்மம் !!! (சிறுகதை)

[guruvi]

Hello Author,

Congratulations for writing an interesting and engaging story.
You pick some unique interesting concepts and this concept is one of the best.

Just wanted to highlight that the flashback is dragging for too long time and there is no tension since both of them like each other. The story has to come back to present to really qualify for incest category. just my thought. thanks again.

Regards,
Gurvi