Adultery காதல் கொஞ்சம் கம்மி, காமம் கொஞ்சம் தூக்கல்

[itsmegirl1315]

Thanks nanba...
For your updates..

Recently you wrote a story half the way it was deleted
I donot know why?

But again  started a new story ,

Donot take personally nanba, it just my pov only.

I have give a small suggestion ,  you can use more tamil words , to first seduction,
And then situation, the girl or women mindset , why she doing it,

You just started a story with in two  updates, the fucking is done.

What about the boy character,
What about the girl character ,
The way you writing   sex  was short.


Donot take personally nanba. It was my pov only.

Cannot do anything with this story. Am working on another story with more romance. Will try your inputs there bro.