Adultery Mirna – Vikram's Innocent Hotwife [COMPLETED]

[heygiwriter]

 
Hahahahah , Same here . I also left the story after that update , For me it was too soon . She just fell for him too quickly , He did not even do much. She was my favorite character . Everything was going fine , Then suddenly Dumbing down of VIKRAM and MIRNA started . 

BHARAT's character becomes too INVINCIBLE  .

Personally I hate INVINCIBLE characters , Suddenly the Story started anchoring around BHARATH , and I also lost interest in it . I just wanted to if someone else's feels the same . lol . 

Adarsh and VIKRAM fight kept me interested but again BHARATH's undefeated ARC and VIKRAM dumbing down made me quit the story . 

But This is my personal take , The story is great regardless  , Writing is phenomenal . 

And I know that you might have already started working on your next story so  , I will be going to read that one . 


   again for your wonderful stories . 


( Comments are for fun   )

I know many of them are disappointed but just read with open mind.