Adultery The Forbidden Relief – My Wife's Secret

[doodhwale_bhaiya]

I swear, this is the first story that completely hooked me. I ended up sleeping at 5 a.m because I just couldn’t stop reading. That’s how invested I was.

Thanks for the long and detailed feedback. I certainly dont want people to stay awake till 5 am.   Also, this story is definitely running parallel sequences for future buildups and side struggles of each character of Simran's family, Bhola's family, lets see where it goes, even i dont know how it will buildup, or what it will buildup to. Having said that, I want more feedback from readers so that if required, i can stir the story a bit. As of now, i think the pace is ok, it will need to increase in future scenes, but for now i think tempo is fine. Question is where are we heading?