Adultery காதல் கொஞ்சம் கம்மி, காமம் கொஞ்சம் தூக்கல்

[Tamilmathi]

Thanks nanba...
For your updates..

Recently you wrote a story half the way it was deleted
I donot know why?

But again started a new story ,

Donot take personally nanba, it just my pov only.

I have give a small suggestion , you can use more tamil words , to first seduction,
And then situation, the girl or women mindset , why she doing it,

You just started a story with in two updates, the fucking is done.

What about the boy character,
What about the girl character ,
The way you writing sex was short.


Donot take personally nanba. It was my pov only.